Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by some that children should learn to use a sense of competition, for the reason that

this

is a method to prepare individuals for the real world, which is exigent.

Conversely

, others think that students who are taught to co-operate will be a more useful adults. In my

opinon

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

, the new generation is more aware about to help other people, so

this

is the moment for

doing

the act that results in something coming to be

making

a change to encourage children to used the

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a business firm whose articles of incorporation have been approved in some state

corporation

operation

. The

last

generation was concerned about

obtain

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obtaining

material wealths, which was possible to get

with

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to

a high level of ambition.

This

feeling has as consequence that people become so competitive, which

as a result

a selfish and individualistic society.

Likewise

,

this

behaviour has a bad influence

in

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on

the health’s people, because produce stress, which can create other illness

such

as hearth attack or stomach problems. For the

previously

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previous

, I disagree with

children encourage

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children, encourage

to have a sense of competition.

On the other hand

, millennials have had a change of mentality which

envolve

work out

evolve

to be more cooperative what have had great results.

For example

, the new generation is worried about their personal

developed

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development

, which is

cultivated though

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cultivated, though

of help, solidarity and cooperation. Those feelings have a positive input in our, due to the level of happiness is higher. For

this

reason, I think

that is

a good option to learn since childhood to be more cooperative. In conclusion, there are two positions about to teach a behaviour in children. I agree

with

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to

encourage to attitudes

such

as help and solidarity, because in my opinion a cooperative society has a more advance than a competitive one.