Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is considered by some that children should learn to use a sense of competition, for the reason that
this
is a method to prepare individuals for the real world, which is exigent. Conversely
, others think that students who are taught to co-operate will be a more useful adults. In my opinon
, the new generation is more aware about to help other people, so a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
this
is the moment for doing
a change to encourage children to used the the act that results in something coming to be
making
coperation
.
The a business firm whose articles of incorporation have been approved in some state
corporation
operation
last
generation was concerned about obtain
material wealths, which was possible to get Suggestion
obtaining
with
a high level of ambition. Suggestion
to
This
feeling has as consequence that people become so competitive, which as a result
a selfish and individualistic society. Likewise
, this
behaviour has a bad influence in
the health’s people, because produce stress, which can create other illness Suggestion
on
such
as hearth attack or stomach problems. For the previously
, I disagree with Suggestion
previous
children encourage
to have a sense of competition.
Accept comma addition
children, encourage
On the other hand
, millennials have had a change of mentality which envolve
to be more cooperative what have had great results. work out
evolve
For example
, the new generation is worried about their personal developed
, which is Suggestion
development
cultivated though
of help, solidarity and cooperation. Those feelings have a positive input in our, due to the level of happiness is higher. For Accept comma addition
cultivated, though
this
reason, I think that is
a good option to learn since childhood to be more cooperative.
In conclusion, there are two positions about to teach a behaviour in children. I agree with
encourage to attitudes Suggestion
to
such
as help and solidarity, because in my opinion a cooperative society has a more advance than a competitive one.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.