You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - ask your friend to send you one of the photographs - explain why you need that particular photograph - and tell your friend what happened to your copy of it.

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Dear Sarah, I hope you are doing great. It’s a great pleasure to write

this

letter

first

to thank you for your wonderful hospitality while I was in the Swiss and request a favour. We had a memorable time and I never forget how much we had fun. Yesterday, I wanted to print some of the pictures, I realised that I have lost my flash

driver

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which contained all photos that we had taken during our trip. As

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all pictures were taken by your camera, I guess you have them. So, I was wondering if you could send me a copy of those photos, especially, the one at the top of the mountain. I remember how long it took us to reach the peak and I believe it was an amazing moment for us. I want to hang that photo on the wall to see it

everyday

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. Can’t wait to see you for our

trip to Germany. Take care, Maryam

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

161 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

cherished memories
nostalgic moment
misplaced
irreplaceable
keepsake
digital blunder
sentimental value
emblematic snapshot
commemorate
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gratitude
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high-resolution
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