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Some people think that music plays an inportant role in seciety. Others think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both views and gives your opinion

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It has been often believed that music has an undeniable role in society while, many people consider it as an amusement. From my perspective, It has a significant role due to history and culture. On the one hand, by looking throughout past, it can be seen that Songs and melodies have been playing an important role and always existed all around the world. Since the instruments are various depend on the region and different kind of material to make melodies, it could provide many crucial details on the culture and history of former nations.
For example
, folk melody is existed in every country with different melodies and rhythms.
Moreover
, it represents a story inside.
This
 is because of, historical events and cultures amazingly affected by the way people putting their emotions into their Songs.
As a result
, it has become most initial part of a country to be comprehended better.
On the other hand
, some people argue that music has no depth and it serves people to just have fun. It is true to say that Nowadays, the way of producing melody is slightly the same in many countries as most of them following the global trends.
Additionally
, concerts and musical shows give people a great number of options,
however
, cultural taking they are extremely weak.
For instance
, many people going out to bars and get relaxed and
also
 entertained in their leisure time and usually these bars offer live performance which plays trendy songs not cultural ones. To sum up, in recent years music has been mainly related to entertainment due to global trends,
however
, I believe it is tremendously important for nations as it will allow us to understand former nations' history and culture.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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