Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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People have different views on the question whether the development of artificial
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would benefit people or not in the near future. In my view, I tend to agree that while technologically, people may be prepared for the advent of artificial
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. From the perspective of morality, there is still much time needed. Admittedly, artificial
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exerts a great deal of positive influence. One of the most noticeable examples is that it helps people to be free from repeated work and even daily routines
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as household chores.
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, for those work that has a high requirement on
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could complete difficult tasks that people hardly make. In
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sense, in some science fictions, artificial
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is a fabulous creation and people have a great aspiration for its utilization in the future.
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, the development of
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technology
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arouses a concern in the point of humanity and morality.
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, some people worry that as artificial
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supersedes people's jobs, there will be social problems led by the unemployment. It is obvious that our governments have not put forward an effective measure to tackle the issue.
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, like colon technology, it is still unknown how risky if computers have similar even better
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than humans. Considering practical problems,
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experiment is hard to be conducted, which in turn making the concern remain. In conclusion, whereas the emerging technology of artificial
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may benefit people in some areas to some extent, as its potential risks still exist, it would be better to be prudent for its operation.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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