Some countries have laws that prohibit animals being used in circuses or other forms of entertainment because it is cruel to keep animals in an environment that can cause them stress. Should all countries have laws to prevent animals being used in circuses and similar forms of entertainment?

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Some countries do not allow to keep animals in circuses or other kind of animal shows, because it is damage for their behaviour and can be
pressure
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pressed
for them. I absolutely agree with
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statement and it would be better for animals, if all countries had
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policy. Nowadays, a plethora of people can see some acts of wild animals in circuses or zoo parks which seem entertainment for them. While these types of enjoyments are evil for animals and we can see
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much
unsparing violence in
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the dressing rooms
during training. If animals do wrong actions which are not suitable for performance, they are
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receiving
some crazy punishments which are very painful. It is a big drawback for animals and can be the beginning of some problematic issues in their conducts. Many animals get a lot of
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misery
from us for our brutality. In my
opinion every
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opinion, every
country should
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create
creates
created
laws for animals' freedom and punish people who torture them. It is a good idea to
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crate
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some wild areas for their safe life and countries can get many profits from their generation like meat, wool and milk.
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, African countries have a large number of national parks which
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keep
wild animals. We can see some less common species of animals there which are endangered.
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why environmental staff takes care
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of
them and tries to enlarge their population. To sum up, everyone should think carefully regards to
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
and establish
variety
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a variety
of fruitful laws for that. I agree that animals have a crucial role in our life and we will lose many essential things without their existences.
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