Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries.what are the advantages and disadvantages

Multinational
compnies
an institution created to conduct business
companies
are recognised as an
icons
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icon
of technological development of countries. They not only generate
huge economy
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huge economies
a huge economy
for the where they located, but
also
provide thousands of jobs for the local citizens.
This
will boost up the GDP of the country.
some
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Some
people argue that these multinational companies (MNCs) are
threat
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a threat
to the local companies and they kill the opportunities for the local
enterpueners
a person who tries to please or amuse
entertainers
.
This
will
effects
the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion
affects
affects affects
the creativity of the
thier
of them or themselves
their
own citizens and I didn't accept that and I will
expalin
make plain and comprehensible
explain
why in
this
essay with some examples. Companies established in more than the
orgin
the place where something begins, where it springs into being
origin
Oregon
aging
country called as multinational companies. Some of these are tech
gaints
any creature of exceptional size
giants
joints
grants
which are
opperating
involved in a kind of operation
operating
in
hunderds
being ten more than ninety
hundreds
of countries. They will become a
biggest
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big
essort
a useful or valuable quality
asset
for the economy of
thier
of them or themselves
their
third
base countries, they generate billions of
dollors
the basic monetary unit in many countries; equal to 100 cents
dollars
and thousands of employments. It is
bit
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a bit
different in the countries they established, there
also
they generate
economy but
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economy, but
it
it is
it's
quite different
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
it is not a local company. For developing countries, establishment of multinational companies
usually open
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usually opens
their markets internationally.
This
will help the country for trading and grow
economically which
Accept comma addition
economically, which
is called
open market system
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an open market system
. Some economists argue that, these multinational companies kill the opportunities for the local people
who wants start
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who wants to start
new companies because they already established a market. Few people think they will make the
gradutes
receive an academic degree upon completion of one's studies
graduate
to just work for their companies
instead
creating new companies because they kill the creativity of those graduates. There is no truth in those
arguements
a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
arguments
, because talented people
always looks
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always look
are always looking
for opportunities and established companies can't stop them. For examples big mobile companies like apple,
samsung
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Samsung
are established in many countries, but there are
also
local companies started manufacturing the mobiles. To conclude, multinational companies are always beneficial for developing countries.
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