Animals should not be used for the benefit of human beings unless there is evidence that the animals do not suffer in any way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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People have different views about the exploitation
on
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of
animals which could benefit mankind's living. While some think animals should not
becoming
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become
the offerings for scientific studies, I firmly believed that those human
being
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beings
should exploit these livestocks for
prolong
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prolonging
prolonged
their lifespan when necessary. People argued that animals,
witch
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
live on the Earth for many years, should have
same right
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the same right
together with
human being
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human beings
.
This
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is because animals and human beings have the same senses, especially pain,
although
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they are not as clever as mankinds. Whereas, those animals could be painful when they suffer from injury or physical abuse. Many dogs,
for instance
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, would have tears when they undergo physical abuse by their owners.
Therefore
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, it is a strong evidence to illustrate that animals
shoule
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
not be
treat
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treated
by violence.
On the other hand
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, I agreed for those people hold the opposite views that human, the only creature stand on the top of
food chain
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the food chain
on
this
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planet, should be served by those livestocks for living
purpose
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purposes
.
For example
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, many
aninals
a living organism characterized by voluntary movement
animals
could provide nutritions that people need,
such
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like protein, fat and so on.
Therefore
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, it is inevitable that animals make their contributions of existence of human species.
By contrast
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, without
intaking
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in taking
these nutrition, mankind may no longer be ensured survive in the future. In conclusion, livestocks are one the most important resources for
human being
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human beings
to
continously
at every point
continuously
continually
live on the planet.
Hence
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, people should be grateful to those beings which sacrifice their lives for existence.
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