Today more and more people are overweight than before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this. What are main affects of this epidemic.
Health is a state of complete mental and physical well-being. For a healthy life, a person need to take a balanced diet and exercise regularly.
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, the obesity is growing at a rapid speed. Linking Words
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essay illustrates the main reasons and consequences of being overweight.
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of all, due to advancements in technology people have become more dependent on machines to carry out their daily tasks. Linking Words
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, these days people are more hooked to electronic devices Linking Words
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has reduced overall physical activity of individuals. Linking Words
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, people prefer to eat outside more rather than cooking their meals at home. Generally, food in restaurants has low nutritional value and high fat content which induces weight issues. Linking Words
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, working in high pressure environment leaves less or no time for people to exercise regularly or have their meals on time. Linking Words
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tendency increases stress-levels which are directly linked to weight problems.
The consequences of being overweight are countless. Linking Words
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, obesity is the mother of many other health problems. Linking Words
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, Polycystic Ovaries Syndrome is a common hormonal disease which occurs in women due to weight problems. Cardiovascular diseases have Linking Words
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, people who are overweight, have low immune system because of which they are more prone catch various diseases easily. Linking Words
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, it reduces concentration ability and energy levels of an individual which leads to less productivity.
To summarise, In my opinion, Obese is indeed a health concern and need to be prioritized. Poor lifestyle and irregular physical activity are its main origin points. It has various serious health implications and it can raise a serious threat to the future of mankind.Linking Words
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