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Today more and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that increasing the price of fattening foods will solve this problem. Do you agree/disagree?

At present, the rate of obesity is increasing rapidly. Gaining weight is a major issue around the world, owing to bad
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 habits. Many people think that it can be resolved by increasing the price of fattening foods. As per my concern, I agree with the statement, but it cannot
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 all the time.
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 with, approximately half of young generation is suffering from overweight problem. It can be solved by many ways,
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 as prices of
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, aware them for body side effects, and show them health
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 benefits. Among all, rising value
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 as an effect, because all lower and middle class people will start to avoid it.
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, the consumption rate will decrease
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 reduce in obesity.
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, a research article mentioned that, in Gujarat, 13% junk
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 utilization rate decreased by reason of high value.
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, the government should start some program to provide knowledge on drawbacks of high calorie
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, as a consequence a dietary habit will improve. To
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, only rising price cannot
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 effectively, in a reason of that, some benefits are associated with it. A less preparation time and an easy availability may
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 as significant results.
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 the side effects are known by some people, but its long lasting property will attract them to have it.
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, bread items have long expiry as compare to others.
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, due to high saturated fat content it will take a long time to digest,
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 long distance travellers are using it while moving to avoid hunger. In conclusion, a high fat content diet habit and lazy lifestyle will
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 as a culprit for overweight issue. I agree with a view of the rising price of these foods to save people and some major disease
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. Still, only one factor cannot
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 sufficiently,
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 more aspects are needed to solve
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 issue.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • fattening foods
  • calorie-dense
  • healthier food choices
  • taxation
  • economic implications
  • social implications
  • subsidies
  • nutritional education
  • public health campaigns
  • nanny state
  • individual's right
  • consumer behavior
  • preventative measures
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