Advances in health and biology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Modern day
science
achieved astonishing height, last
century scientist are capable of accomplishing the unthinkable. Technology coupled with science
is far more superior and have contributed to increasing the life
span of humans. Firstly
, in this
essay we shall see how lives have been improved and secondly
, health related risks are reduced
Biology is integral part of science
; it is directly related to survival and health. Observing rapid advances made in this
field, one must agree human lives are in better hands than ever. Specially bio engineering: if we compare life
a century ago it is possible to list the new benefits like doctor, diagnose, bone screening, organ transplant or plastic surgeries all of which are extremely rare. For instance
, consider a face transplant or organ transplant operations this
could be unthinkable, conversely
today hospitals are able to perform such
complicated surgeries with success rate of 90 percent. Therefore
, advances of science
have enhanced life
across the society considerably.
During the 18th and early 19th century doctors were struggling to save patients life
despite the operations being successful, owing to various infections that occur either before or post the procedure. Nevertheless
, biology is evolved drastically thanks to numerous discoveries and invention doctors are now successfully treat their patients. For example
, travelling to second
world countries which is previously considered dangerous is now possible. This
is because, precaution medicines such
as vaccines, immunisation and allergy drugs are made available which was previously not possible, adding to this
numerous drug manufacturing companies have established constituting in reduced price of such
medicine. Hence
people with lower income can also
access them. Consequently
, risk related to medicinal procedure are lowered and thus
creating increased opportunity for mankind to travel across the globe with a secured feeling
To conclude, I concur that modern science
have definitely increased human life
span and their wellbeing, thus
in the history of mankind this
era provided best in class facility to humans to prevail.Submitted by rakesh.klaus on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!