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Many people believe that countries should produce food for all population eats and import food as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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A part of every
country
 growth depends upon the
import
 and export of goods between them. Some people have an opinion that every
country
 must keep all the
food
 consumption for their people welfare because
import
 has to be at a minimal proportion. In my opinion, there are several benefits why
import
 is significant
also
 proper
food
 needed to be
import
 ahead too.
Import
 is essential for countries and it would signify various reasons why it is necessary.
Firstly
, after keeping the appropriate option for their own
country
, it is required to
import
 the leftover, which will be an income for local farmers. Product prices will increase if imported
food
 has reduced and it results in no profit.
Secondly
, weather and soil conditions of all the countries are not similar. If any
country
 is wealthy in the producing particular foods option comparatively more than another
country
, where no
such
 crop is found than
import
 could be done to balance it.
For example
, India is rich in the production of wheat, rice and spices, since other countries have no production of these products,
then
 it is beneficial to
import
 from those countries.
Lastly
, every
country
 will not enrich in farming techniques, but they could specialize in manufacturing and industrialization.
Hence
, the
import
 within the countries and balance the consumption of goods equally.
On the other hand
, it is not always necessary that imported products will be of upgraded quality
also
 the
food
 is imported from long distances.
Therefore
, it could degrade and in some cases, even, chemicals are used to keep them. In conclusion, it is essential for a
country
 growth to do an
import
 of
food
. Keeping the extra foods can result in wastage and loss in income for farmers as well as to make a relation with other countries
import
 is vital.
Import
 between different countries can create useful links and raise the growth of an economy.
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