You are going on a short training course at a college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter, - explain your situation - describe the accommodation you require - say when you will need it

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Dear Sir, Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and

best

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of spirits. My name is Rushi Patel and I'm writing

this

letter to request you about my stay in Ireland during my training course. I have

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ourse

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course

in Greenmount college and it starts from the

month. Let me explain my situation, it is the

irst

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first

time I'm coming to

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foreign country and due to

this

reason I don't have enough ideas about everything and I

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need a place for living over there during my training time. Actually, I'm coming

toIreland

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to Ireland

Ireland

on 1st November, so I need a place for 30 days from that date. I prefer to live in a

tudent

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student

house, so I can spend more time with other students and I can learn more about the local culture. Would you kindly, look into

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matter and it will be really helpful if you are able to provide me accommodation near a college, so I can easily travel. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, RUSHI.

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