Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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uture of
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uman generation. It
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on how they learn. Some
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eople think that
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is one of the best methods to quickly learn for a child.So, they can regularly watch
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television
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school.
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believe that
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ood method to learn as it has more drawbacks than benefits.
Firstly
, The
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are not have good subject behind it.
Moreover
, It can increase an eye problem.
For example
, the one surveys took by oxford that how long children watching tv and what are the benefits and cause. The results are shocking, the children who watch
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more than 5 hours a day. 80% of them are suffering from
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problem.
Furthermore
, the child becomes more aggressive and introvert.
This
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affects their health as they are not eating properly to see the programme.
Secondly
, If they are no supervision, what they are watching
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some of them attracted to watch adult thing.
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ctual effect on their mind and thinking process.
Nevertheless
, Video helps to better understand
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children but, should have supervision who can ask them how they understand,
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half knowledge
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more dangerous than no knowledge. On other hand, many programmes are designed for children. These programmes are helping the increased interest in that particular field and some of them actually become
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ream of their future.
For instance
, Abdul Kalam, a famous rocket scientist and former prime minister of India says that he was watching a show in his childhood, which is based on science and one day, he saw a rocket experiment and from that day his dream to make rocket by my self.
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est example for several youths to actually start their dream from childhood. To summarize,
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watching
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at home and school is not a good idea for children education. The best would be
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usion of studying a physical teacher or parent with video can be useful for them.
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  • passive
  • sedentary
  • limit
  • creativity
  • imagination
  • educational content
  • expose
  • different cultures
  • perspectives
  • negative effects
  • behavior
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