Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many people thought that they have an option to watch newly released movies on phones, laptops and tablets.i.e iPad and now they won't require to rush for cinema to watch. Others suggest to get more fun in the movies
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we should watch the movies in the theatre. Well, In my opinion, I think it depends on the personal choice that how they would like to enjoy.
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, there are many people who really love to watch movies. Because movies bring quite emotions and get pumped up to the people. What is the purpose that, why everyone wants to watch a movie? Do that person really wanted to see that character and have eager to know the history of the character. Generally, some movies have always quite inspirational and people do follow the characters in real. Those are the reasons that people prefer to watch the movies on cinemas to feel the film everything in real. Movie theatres do quite attract people for watching the movies by the loud sound, rhythms, 3d, 4d and big screens.
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, When we visited
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time to watched the movie " Jumanji - 2",
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there I probably found all the auditorium were packed with the audience.
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, there are many people, who just want to watch the film, because it's a new released. Even, they are little miser to spend money, because motion picture theatre cost a little expensive with enjoying foods and beverages. Nowadays, there are lots of apps, who telecasting new movies without ads and intervals, where people often can enjoy movies with little spendings.
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, Netflix, amazon prime and Hotstar are the apps, where people can enjoy the new movies with a big screen at home or small Ipad, phones and easy tablets.
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, we
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have a Netflix and amazon prime app, where we enjoyed the movies at the time of lockdown when the world's got shutdown. Inconclusion, to watching movies on the big screen in cinemas or small screen at home is quite up to the person, what they are expecting through the movies or they just wanted to see the movie, because it is a new one and they don't want to miss it. In my opinion, I reckon that mostly 70% of people really like to go to the cinemas to watch movies.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
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  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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