The efficient functioning of society is based on rules and laws. Society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that our societies will be in disorder if there

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any rules to regulate people's

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. More people even hold the view that people shouldn'

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be allowed to do whatever they want to do, which I am consistent with. There may be

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ncreasing number of crimes in the

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if everyone can do whatever they want without any limitations and punishments. People have unlimited desired to wealth and fame and they tend to get money in an easier way

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as grabbing from others. In companies, the employees in high positions can lie to others and corrupt public money easily if they are not punished by laws no matter what crimes they made. Gradually, the whole

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will be difficult to control because companies go bankrupt and people become lazy to earn money by their hands. Even though governments can'

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control

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without any rules, too much

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benefit for the development of the whole

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. There are many businesses that need some freedom of regulations to develop, which contributes to companies' innovation and creation. If there are too many

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limitations

, like tax laws or criteria of entering the market, companies, especially for start-ups are very difficult to expand their schemes. Due to over-loaded regulations put into start-ups,

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, in Shanghai every year half the companies go bankrupt and can'

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create more jobs for the

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. These not only

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inancial burden for the

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increase the unemployment of the

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, which is the basic factor of

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isorder. To sum up, the whole

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will face

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ig disorder if every individual has rights to do whatever they want to. The most suitable policy is that

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supervising

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in moderate laws and regulations, without too much or too little because

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need

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some freedom to create and develop.