A lot of social problems can be related to teenagers these days. Some feel that this is because parents are not able to spend enough time to take care of their teenage child. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, many social issues link to young adults. Some people claim that the main reason for
this
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on
the above statement and throughout Verify preposition usage
with
this
essay, I will explain it in detail.
On one hand, when parents do not have much time to keep eye on their children they have massive freedom and it can lead them to do unwanted things. To explain more, some adults have no idea what their Linking Words
teengers
doing with modern technology. There Correct your spelling
teenagers
are
various way to get Change the verb form
is
involed
with unnecessary websites and it could mislead them to use drugs or Correct your spelling
involved
somking
activities. Correct your spelling
smoking
For example
, my Linking Words
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uncle's Correct your spelling
cousins
cousin's
13 year old
son addicted to drugs at Add a hyphen
13-year-old
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ery young age and doctors said that it because he had enough freedom and mother and father could not keep eye on him. Add an article
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ack of attention from adults can Add an article
the
a
realted
to children's social issues.
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related
relate
On the other hand
, social status is one more possible factor Linking Words
c
ould cause Add a pronoun
that
this
issue. To clear up, the environment we Linking Words
rise
our young generation Correct your spelling
raise
also
matters Linking Words
such
as your neighbourhood, school mates and relatives. If youngsters growing up with an environment which is full of Linking Words
violance
, bullying and harassment it could affect their future. Correct your spelling
violence
For instance
, my neighbour's teenager was bullied at school and due to the impact of bad Linking Words
habbits
later on he becomes one of them. Correct your spelling
habits
Thus
, teen adult's Linking Words
commiunity
issues can link to the surround that they grew up.
To sum up, lack of parent's attention and the social environment can cause Correct your spelling
community
society
issues Replace the word
social
which
related to young adults.Delete the pronoun
apply
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