A lot of social problems can be related to teenagers these days. Some feel that this is because parents are not able to spend enough time to take care of their teenage child. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many social issues link to young adults. Some people claim that the main reason for
this
is parents are not looking after their children properly.
However
, I partially agree
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the above statement and throughout
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essay, I will explain it in detail. On one hand, when parents do not have much time to keep eye on their children they have massive freedom and it can lead them to do unwanted things. To explain more, some adults have no idea what their
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teenagers
doing with modern technology. There
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various way to get
involed
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involved
with unnecessary websites and it could mislead them to use drugs or
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smoking
activities.
For example
, my
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cousins
cousin's
uncle's
13 year old
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son addicted to drugs at
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ery young age and doctors said that it because he had enough freedom and mother and father could not keep eye on him.
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, It is certain that
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ack of attention from adults can
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related
relate
to children's social issues.
On the other hand
, social status is one more possible factor
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ould cause
this
issue. To clear up, the environment we
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our young generation
also
matters
such
as your neighbourhood, school mates and relatives. If youngsters growing up with an environment which is full of
violance
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violence
, bullying and harassment it could affect their future.
For instance
, my neighbour's teenager was bullied at school and due to the impact of bad
habbits
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habits
later on he becomes one of them.
Thus
, teen adult's
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community
issues can link to the surround that they grew up. To sum up, lack of parent's attention and the social environment can cause
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issues
which
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related to young adults.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Estrangement
  • Adolescence
  • Boundary-setting
  • Parental neglect
  • Supervision
  • Peer pressure
  • Quality time
  • Intergenerational gap
  • Cyberbullying
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Youth delinquency
  • Mentorship
  • Family dynamics
  • Workaholism
  • Helicopter parenting
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