In most countries, prison is the most common solution when people commit a crime. However, if they were to receive better education, it could prevent them from becoming criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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rate is a debatable topic nowadays. Obviously, punishment is common for committing a

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worldwide. Some individuals believe better

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can help to reduce the

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but personally, I can not agree on

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aspect due to various reasons.

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essay will emphasize on few points why proper

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can not decrease the criminal mentality. Lack of proper

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brings down the criminal minds is not a good concept, because most of the times educated individuals commit the

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recent research on a pre-secondary school in a small city in Japan show, most of the thieves, who steal stationaries, belongs to school teachers who are supposed to educate others.

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, there are several examples, where it has been seen that talented people are actually doing the

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of non-educated people. Another reason is

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entality. Criminals are doing the

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for passion, they seek joy when they commit a

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, research shows, illegal activities are driven by the

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mind and it is not driven either by poverty or by lack of

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ewspaper describes, doctors' in the UK find common human behaviour among the criminals who commit different crimes.

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study clearly explains that due to

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process people become criminals. To conclusion, in my opinion, I completely disagree with the view which indicates proper academic recognition can bring down the

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among us because it completely depends on human nature which is attached with the human soul. A better human being would not be just justified with

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cademic grade but

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justified by his nature along with good mental stability