Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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Museums are the best place to learn the

history

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and get information about the past for people who are interested in their

history

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. Nowadays, many museums have changed their policies

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as charging an entrance fee. In my opinion, I completely with the statement that charging people who want to visit museums, and it is considered by many that it has advantages,

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, disadvantages of

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statement cannot be neglect.

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of all, museums are the best place to get information about the

history

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, technological development, and so on. Individuals visit museums to get information and wants to know about their

history

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well to not make the same mistakes as their parents did or might solve some technological problems.

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, a student who wants to research might have to go to the museum to do his/her research and might find something very important for humanity,

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, students might not have enough money to the cover for admission.

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, fees for museums will affect the people who do not want to pay and might

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stop someones` discovery.

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, museums

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need some income for cleaning, resource or maintenance of the property.

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, it is believed by many that museums should charge people for visiting.

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, museums economically supported by governments and it should be one of the responsibilities of government though.

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, people will do their research in museums freely. In conclusion, charge for access to museums might be a block for people who are capable to discover something new for humanity, that’s why society would more benefit from free museums rather than charge for entrance.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

267 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Admission fee
Revenue stream
Maintenance
Overcrowding
Commercialization
Cultural heritage
Diverse attendance
Community ownership
Access to culture
Visitor experience
Exhibit quality
Cultural mission
Reliance on funding
Government subsidies
Cultural accessibility

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Write a letter to your friend about a recent trip you enjoyed. Include: Where you went What you did there Why you enjoyed it

5.Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year. It can make them perform better in their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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