Everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, everyone ought to have the possibility to enrol at the
University
without considering academic skills. Supporting each student
can improve the education level of the country. This
essay completely agrees with that statement. I believe that all students can
have the chance to start Verb problem
should
University
and understand if they want to follow the
Change the word
their
study
or go to work.
First of all, admission Fix the agreement mistake
studies
at
the Change preposition
to
university
can be free without taking an exam that attests the
capacity of the Change preposition
to the
student
. This
is a good opportunity for the student
as they can decide what type of faculty Fix the agreement mistake
students
start
. Fix the infinitive
to start
For example
, if the entry test abolished
, more Add a missing verb
were abolished
student
would want to continue Fix the agreement mistake
students
the
Change the word
their
study
. Fix the agreement mistake
studies
As a result
, the general knowledge in society will increase and the
undergraduate can Correct article usage
apply
envelope
more ability and interest Verb problem
exert
and
so they will achieve good results in their future Correct word choice
apply
carrier
.
Correct your spelling
careers
Secondly
, the open enrol
at the Replace the word
enrollment
university
can increase the interest in student
to follow the educational training. Fix the agreement mistake
students
Therefore
, the valuation of the academic ability of the student
will be appropriate with the interest and knowledge acquired during the university
. In fact, an undergraduate can improve their knowledge on
the subject that study. Change preposition
of
Then
, the professor will evaluate the academic ability of the students.
In conclusion, give
the possibility to start the Wrong verb form
giving
university
has a positive impact on the student'
life. As far as I am concerned, going to Change noun form
student's
university
can be promoted by educational institute
it is the best option for a lot of students after higher education.Fix the agreement mistake
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Task Achievement
Ensure that your introduction clearly addresses the prompt and presents your stance. Develop your main points with relevant examples and ensure a clear and logical order of ideas.
Coherence and Cohesion
Work on organizing your ideas more cohesively to improve the overall structure of the essay. Ensure that your introduction and conclusion effectively summarize your main points.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite