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In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. Do you agree or disagree?

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The international organization is performing the main role for every country. In many
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,globalized companies and their products are very important.
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 trend is not damaging our quality of life. Out of all the arguments the strongest
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 to prove my
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 is the economy. The best example to prove my
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 is, Tesla is an American multinational company which is coming in
India
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.
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 will create a lot of job opportunities and give Indian
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 a better way to communicate.
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,
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 will boost
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 overall economy at some
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, multinational companies are not damaging
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's quality of life.
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, another
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 to prove my
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 is a relation between the two
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 are stronger than the past. Especially for developing
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,
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,
India
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 and USA relation is much stronger than in the past. Because after COVID-19 pandemic most of the multinational companies which are established in China are now moving to
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 for their production.
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,
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 can buy those products easily and they can afford it. They do not have to import
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 things.
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, Apple is a high demand product in
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 and
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 are spending so much money on it. Whereas, they start their production in
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last
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 year. Now
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 do not have to pay extra and it will available easily compare to the past. In conclusion, I would say that international organization are not damaging the community's quality of life unless they produce their product under rules and regulation of government.
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