Many people argue that smoking should be banned due to its harmful effects on human health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Smoking should be banned because of its detrimental effects on the human's
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, due to
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many people have argued. In
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esssay
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, I would agree that smoking does not give a positive impact
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the
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people's
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and even
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society.
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and foremost,
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is wealth,
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it is vital to maintain the physical
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healthy.And so,to keep the
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from any conditions, it is important to well choose what we are eating or taking.
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,eating a healthy diet like vegetables and
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foods and
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taking supplements like vitamin C is beneficial to
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human
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, doing exercise will keep the
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fit and would help in increasing the
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's immune system,as well as keeping the mind healthy.
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,smoking use has been dominating to more people in the society in which it produces harmful effects
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the human's
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.For
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reason, it resulted
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many arguments to those that are against
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smoking.
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,a father who smokes inside the house with their kids.
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;in
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case,the children are the most vulnerable.
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, in time acquiring several conditions is of high risk not only to the user but
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to the ones near or
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"
second
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smoker" which is according to the study , is known to be the more at risk in getting certain condition
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as lung cancer. In conclusion,smoking does not give any benefits to the human's
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at all.Thereby,imposing strict regulations and higher taxes
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to control the use of cigarette smoking.Ultimately, I would agree that smoking should be banned.
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