Many people argue that smoking should be banned due to its harmful effects on human health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Smoking should be banned because of its detrimental effects on the human's
health
;
hence
, due to
this
many people have argued. In
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, I would agree that smoking does not give a positive impact
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the
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people's
health
and even
the
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society.
First
and foremost,
health
is wealth,
therefore
it is vital to maintain the physical
body
healthy.And so,to keep the
body
from any conditions, it is important to well choose what we are eating or taking.
For instance
,eating a healthy diet like vegetables and
protein rich
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foods and
also
taking supplements like vitamin C is beneficial to
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human
health
.
In addition
, doing exercise will keep the
body
fit and would help in increasing the
body
's immune system,as well as keeping the mind healthy.
However
,smoking use has been dominating to more people in the society in which it produces harmful effects
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the human's
health
.For
this
reason, it resulted
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many arguments to those that are against
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smoking.
For example
,a father who smokes inside the house with their kids.
Therefore
;in
this
case,the children are the most vulnerable.
Consequently
, in time acquiring several conditions is of high risk not only to the user but
also
to the ones near or
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"
second
smoker" which is according to the study , is known to be the more at risk in getting certain condition
such
as lung cancer. In conclusion,smoking does not give any benefits to the human's
body
at all.Thereby,imposing strict regulations and higher taxes
inorder
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to control the use of cigarette smoking.Ultimately, I would agree that smoking should be banned.
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