Some people think that the best way to solve global environmental problem is to increase cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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conditions. In my opinion, it may help to some extent;
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of petrol can help reduce
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environmental pollution to some degree.
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, excessive use of cars emits carbon dioxide into the atmosphere which is detrimental to the
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. If the cost of petrol and diesel hiked, individuals are starting to use their cars less and
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, in turn, can positive development.
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, the change in fuel cost will not stop the
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pollution. Beside the vary
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affect poor and middle-class families. On the other sides, governments take several steps to resolve these problems. An effective way to control pollution, the government should invest in renewable energy like wind, tide and solar rather than non-renewable sources like coal, diesel and other gasoline products.
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, by improving public transportation and reducing the cost of travelling,
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overnment can encourage more people to use public transport;
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nvironment as well as traffic conjunction. In additions, they should ban some materials like plastic which is highly used in our day to day lives. The more using of Non-bio-degradable materials makes climate condition more worst. To conclude, I strongly believe that the hike in gas
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is not the only option to control
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condition. Improving public transport and developing renewable source for power generation is the best way to changes climate conditions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • emissions
  • alternative energy
  • conservation
  • mitigate
  • renewable energy technologies
  • affordability
  • collective action
  • innovation in energy efficiency
  • global cooperation
  • environmental measures
  • pollution
  • economic disparity
  • revenue
  • sustainable development
  • environmental sustainability
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