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Some people think that teaching methodology in the modern classroom should be based on experiential learning while others believe that traditional approach is still the best. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

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With emerging technologies, the current
way
 of teaching has changed quite significantly. I'm in accordance with the fact that
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 experiential teaching is
way
 more helpful
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 the traditional method, in today's world. In
this
 essay, I would like to state the reasons for the same, according to my knowledge.
Firstly
, hands-on learning is a
way
 where students learn by applying what is taught to them in the classroom.
This
 enables them to get
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instantaneous
 feedback on their work.
Thus
, helping them shape their overall
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cognitive
 development.
For instance
, in physics, rather than sharing just a formula for current, if the students are explained exactly how ampere and voltages work, with real-time examples, followed by a
way
 to use them in a small class project, would help them understand the concept exponentially.
Secondly
, immersive learning provides
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hence
 making them better at understanding and solving problems.
This
way
, they learn to brainstorm and conceptualize solutions with each other and in turn build useful skills for life
such
 as team building, leadership and so on.
For example
,
instead
 of just reading out the environmental issues that we are facing, if there could be a workshop on how demeaning the environment today is resulting into harsh climate changes, and how probably they could help contain it, even if it is a small step of throwing away garbage in the right bin, could prove meaningful. In conclusion, learning through experiences is a great
way
 of teaching in today's modern world as it grooms the students for a better future, by developing their cognition and reflective skills.
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