Poor nutrition and obesity is a problem in many developed countries and some people believe that a tax on fast food would reduce the problem. Do you agree?

Most of the countries are facing trouble due to improper diet and obesity,

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few individuals suggest that imposing a tax on low nutrition cuisine will control the problem. I partially agree that few other rules to be implemented , advertising how the instant eatable component is harmful along with tax.

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, public these days due to busy work-life culture they are not having enough time to cook a healthy lunch, because of

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issue they are choices readily available foodstuff which is of poor protein and heavy fat content which makes them gain weight.

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, a recent survey conducted by the World Health Organisation has stated that 80% of the working employees are consuming street cuisine due to insufficient hours for preparing their meal.

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the government should change the timings of private companies and

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advertise the problems of having unhealthy snacks as their daily routine and educate the population regarding the consumption of calories per day.

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, drinking sugary drinks will make a person fat,

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they should impose a tax on

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beverages;

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, if a normal person drinks 1 tin of coke he almost consumes 20% of the artificial sweetener which is very harmful to the body.

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charging the money on

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type of drinks will have benefits and society will

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avoid having these liquids. Another solution is that humankind should adopt healthy products, to achieve

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manufacturer need to label all the nutrients on the meat packets and they should provide a discount on organic products which makes the customers buy

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thing. To conclude, advertising and labelling the number of calories available on the meat packets will make mankind to adopt healthy habits and

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cost of the unhealthy piece should be available at a high price,

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most developed countries could achieve good results in making community healthy.