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Some people believe that if a police officer carries guns, it can encourage a higher level of violence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The
police
’s primary task is law enforcement to maintain public security.
Also
, carrying a
gun
 is an essential part of the
police
’s uniform.
However
, in the
last
 year, the level of
police
violence
 has risen.
Therefore
, many people claim that carrying a pistol could increase the level of
violence
.
This
 essay aims to discuss both sides of the argument.
Firstly
, the profession of a
police
 officer is demanding and challenging.
Therefore
, carrying a
gun
 serves as personal protection.
Also
, solving issues that require
police
 intervention always commences with the establishment of the dialogue.
Therefore
, the use of
violence
 is always the
last
 choice. I agree that
police
 officers should carry a
gun
 due to their protection,
however
, we should be aware that there is a potential power abuse, even though it is more common in the US than it is in Europe.
However
, the image of a
gun
 can be terrifying.
Moreover
, many have seen many American action movies, where everything was solved with the
gun
.
Therefore
, in many conflicted situations people tend to believe, the forces will be used, and
violence
 will occur. Even though it could lead to
violence
, I believe we should educate ourselves more on
this
 topic, and trust since the power has been authorized. Overall, the nature of a job demands certain protection, and it
also
 represents the authority and seriousness of the profession. As much as it could lead to an increased level of
violence
, there are protocols and written rules that prohibit and demands the usage of the
gun
.
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