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Cricket has become more popular than the national sports in the sub continental countries. What do you think are the reasons behind this?

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Cricket is becoming the nation choice
game
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 in many countries
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 as India, Pakistan and many Developed countries like England even USA is following the course. There are many reasons behind the popularity of
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 sport among them one is, the introduction of many new formats of
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such
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 as T20, which has brought huge dynamism in
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 and the
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 has become really fast as compared to test matches and one-day matches .
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 the public is getting good entertainment as life is getting busy day-by-day.
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, the
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 in some country are now able to watch
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 on their mobile phones as-well new platforms are coming on the internet to provide the live and latest updates to the spectators. So Helping the
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 to be viewed by the masses.
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, The
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 is economical to play and in developing countries cost really affect the adaptability, like few only need a Bat and Ball to play
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 and they don't even need any kind of special grounds.
People
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 even play
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 inside a small ground or a house. Fan following is
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 a concern as
people
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 really talk about their favourite star in a cricket team, they really like to follow and admire them,
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 sometimes their admiration becomes madness and now a day huge Money is
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 involved in
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 sport. Which is making
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 like the sport due to all the glamour involved in it. In ,Conclusion, as the developing nations are growing their need for entertainment, is
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 growing and Cricket is becoming a
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 choice
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 making it a Nations
Game
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.
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