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Some people believe it is best to speak while others believe writing is better way of communication. Do you agree or disagree

#people #communication
It is often believed by
people
 that communicating in
person
 has a better impact than the one created by writing. Even I strongly believe that it is always worthwhile to have a one on one talk to convey things in the best possible way. There are four reasons to substantiate my point of view to
this
 given statement.
To begin
 with, when we talk to a
person
 or a group of
people
 on their
face
, it helps us understand their reaction in the
first
 place. To be clearer, the expressions which are invoked by listening to someone in
a
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personal communication
,
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 gives the best feedback to the involved
person
. Another point to be considered here is that while talking on
face
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people
 usually speak the truth and do not conceal anything. To give an example, when my boss asked me about my leaves, I told him the truth and he was satisfied that I was not lying as he could judge me
then
 and there.
Moreover
,
people
 are able to clear all doubts at the same time which save a lot of valuable time and energy. To cite an example, my cousins who had a discussion in
person
 about booking a movie ticket,
were
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 able to clarify all points and came to a conclusion at the earliest.
Lastly
, it improves human relationships by discussing things
face
 to
face
. To elaborate,
people
 can judge others and identify traits while talking to each other in
person
.
This
 helps to build confidence in their relationship and there is no place for any misunderstanding. To conclude, after having a glance at the above explanation, I truly believe that it carries more weightage to talking in
person
 and will help to build
strong
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 foundation
to
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 human relationships.
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