Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Pet
ownership has become common in recent years, and while some individuals believe that
this
has a positive impact, others argue that it is unhealthy and they may spread dangerous diseases.
This
essay will discuss both points of view and agree with the idea that having a
pet
is beneficial for young ones. On the one hand, the primary reason for individuals to consider household animals as a threat is their aggressive behaviour.
That is
to say, households that have
children
below five years may provoke them by treating them roughly.
For example
,
children
may harm the pets or chew their ears.
This
causes a
pet
to become angry and counterattack.
Additionally
, household pets may spread diseases like allergies and food poisoning because they carry dirt which contains various bacteria, pathogens and virus.
However
, a little bit of parental supervision is more than enough to take care of these problems. Parents should never leave very young
children
alone with the
pet
. It is
also
important to groom the pets properly so that they do not carry pathogens.
On the other hand
, having a
pet
has more reasonable benefits for
children
.
Firstly
, caring for their furry friends,
such
as taking them for a walk, feeding them and grooming them teaches them to be responsible not only towards other animals but
also
with people.
Furthermore
, being exposed to dogs or cats from a very young age will strengthen their immune system, and
thus
reduce their chances of falling ill. A Swedish study,
for instance
, reported that
children
below one year who grew up with dogs and cats have a healthy immune system and had no allergy issues or asthma, even though their family has a history of allergies and asthma. In conclusion,
although
owning a
pet
has a few negative impacts on
children
, I believe that there are more benefits as they teach
children
empathy and
also
boost their immunity.
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