Some people say that Government should break down all the historic building and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree

Historic

buildings

and monuments are

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of the most valuable

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of any country.

However

, there are some people who believe that the authority should demolish these

buildings

in order to construct new ones. I strongly disagree with

this

statement because these constructions not only do educate us regarding our history and culture

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but attract tourists as well.

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essay will support my points in the following paragraphs.

First

and foremost, many ancient constructions are significant to the history of the place since

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may witness many crucial events.

For example

, in India,

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of India

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is a symbol of

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colonial system that has a remarkable position in the Indian freedom struggles.

Additionally

, these kinds of

buildings

also

highlight how our culture is shaped to the current form. Perhaps,

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is

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one of the reasons why

this

monument is kept as a precious belonging of Indians.

Secondly

, these monuments are attracted by millions of tourists, which eventually, assists

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flourish

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economy of the country as

this

can be a source of income for many nations.

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is because these days many educationalists and researchers are motivated to learn

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places and

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value, so they tend to visit these places.

By contrast

, if demolished the constructions, it would have caused financial loss and people would have been prevented from learning their culture, past history and paying respect toward influential figures. In conclusion, people have a different view on whether old

buildings

are need

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to be kept or demolished. I firmly think that these are definitely preserved for our future generation.