Many companies today sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that this is a good thing for the world of sport. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era, as
sports
are very popular among
people
of all ages, advertising
companies
taking take advantage by promoting their
products
through these events. Indeed, sponsoring
the
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sports
not only benefits the
companies
but
also
sports
as a whole .According to my promotion of
sports
through advertisements is a good way to encourage
sports
stars and general
people
to indulge in it. Certainly, when a
compeny
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company

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sponser
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sponsor

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frolic activities, it helps organizer to cultivate
sportsman
and improve
infrastrucure
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infrastructure

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along with help
companies
to promote their product on
wider
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scale. Of course to provide
high quality
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training to a
sports
team with
the
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special equipment, not possible without spending
huge
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amount of money.
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– In 1998 neither big
companies
wants
sponser
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sponsor

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the
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Indian women hockey nor wants to connect their name with them.
As a
result
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orgnaizer
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organizer

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had to face many
dfficulties
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difficulties

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to train the team and
orgnaize
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organized

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the event.
In addition
to that
sports
are food for the brain and large of
people
watch
sports
. So if
companies
advertise their
products
through
sports
, they have
large
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audience and
acceptance
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an acceptance
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rate of
products
are high.
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cricker
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cracker
quicker

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wear
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a wrist

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wrist band
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of some brand, his follower
start
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using that brand. So
its
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favourable for both
companies
as well as
sports
. On the flip side, along with these
advantages
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it
also
has some adverse effect on society. As
people
blindanly
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blindly

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follow their
favorite
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sportsman
in that case whatever
advertisment
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they
are do
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they start using that. So if
sportsman
promotes any
alchohol
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alcohol

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or
tabacoo
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tobacco

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products
kid/ young generation
start
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taking that without
thinkng
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its
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severe effects.
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survay
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published in daily
news paper
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newspaper

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number of
tabacoo
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and alcohol consumption increased in kids after
sportsman
start
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promoting these
products
. Along with
this
puttng
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putting

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lots of
advertisment
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advertisement

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on
ground
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, on the
side bars
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, on
sportsman
’s
tshirt
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shirt
t-shirt
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some time make the watching experience verse, as
instead
of
sports
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sportspeople

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people
diverted to that
advertisment
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advertisement

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. In conclusion, there is a
sgnificant
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significant

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advantage of
sponsering
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sponsoring

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commercials in
sports
to nurture the
sportsman
and promote the
sports
globaly
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globally
global

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and
also
promot
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promote

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commercal
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commercial

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to large scale.

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