Many companies today sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that this is a good thing for the world of sport. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern era, as

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are very popular among

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of all ages, advertising

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taking take advantage by promoting their

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through these events. Indeed, sponsoring

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through advertisements is a good way to encourage

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to indulge in it. Certainly, when a

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company

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sponsor

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and improve

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infrastructure

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to promote their product on

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scale. Of course to provide

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training to a

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team with

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special equipment, not possible without spending

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amount of money.

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Indian women hockey nor wants to connect their name with them.

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orgnaizer

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difficulties

to train the team and

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organize

organized

the event.

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to that

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are food for the brain and large of

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watch

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. So if

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advertise their

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through

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, they have

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audience and

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an acceptance

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rate of

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are high.

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wrist band

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of some brand, his follower

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using that brand. So

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favourable for both

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as well as

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sportsman

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in that case whatever

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they

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they start using that. So if

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promotes any

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alcohol

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tobacco

products

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kid/ young generation

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taking that without

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thinking

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severe effects.

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start

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promoting these

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. Along with

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putting

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the ground

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, on the

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, on

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’s

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some time make the watching experience verse, as

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people

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diverted to that

advertisment

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. In conclusion, there is a

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significant

advantage of

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sponsoring

commercials in

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to nurture the

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and promote the

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globaly

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globally

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promot

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promote

commercal

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commercial

to large scale.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Topic Vocabulary:

sponsorship
advertisement
financial support
visibility
popularity
athletes
excel
healthy competition
commercialization
fair competition
profits
well-being
exclusion
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