You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to explain why I have been unable to return the book I borrowed for 7

days

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, which is now overdue. Actually, a few

days

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back I received a letter from my father that my grandmother

has

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had

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been diagnosed with a fetal condition called "Liver cirrhosis", and she needs immediate treatment for that, Doctors

also

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recommended that surgery should be done urgently to Prevent the whole liver get damaged. My grandmother and I have a good bond with each other,

Therefore

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she wanted to see me before she underwent the operation. so, I booked a flight and reached here the next day. we met and I motivated her for the operation and it went successful. Unfortunately, I will not be able to reach there on time to submit the books as I have to be here for a few more

days

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to give my family emotional support. I will be beyond grateful if you can extend my limit for the next 5

days

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as I cannot do it physically on the computer or else I have to pay extra for it. You will find my library card in an

enclose

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enclosed

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envelope

along with

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this

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letter. Thank you for the help! Yours faithfully, XYZ

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coherence cohesion

Ensure the reasons and the request are logically organized. For example, mention the situation and then explain about the request.

task achievement

Remove minor language errors for a clearer, more formal tone. For instance, avoid informal contractions like 'so' and 'we' especially in formal writing.

task achievement

The tone is polite and formal, which suits the context of the letter.

greeting and closing

Salutation and complementary close are appropriately used.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

211 words

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