You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house.when you returned home. You discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks like , where you think you left it and what was inside it. Make some suggestions about how to get it back.

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Dear Anal, I hope

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letter finds you in good health.I am writing

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letter to concern with my

coat

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forgotten at your home on weekend. I know there was a cold and after some

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the cold was gone away, which suddenly transformed into scolding weather

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why I removed my

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, we had enjoyed ourselves a lot with witty jocks and playing games. In

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weather changed situation, we all are put off our coats at one side, I vividly remember that I placed my

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in the big room in your house.

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, the

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colour is back with white lines, which is made of cotton cloth and approve 3 feet long up to kneel.I remember that was put on a hanger behind the door in a large room.I wish you easily find out. I am forced to you searching my

coat

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because inside the

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pocket I have placed stupendous documents list which I would have submitted my project manager before

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Monday.one you find the

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please call me, so I make some arrangement to someone collect my

coat

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maybe my uncle collected because he is living your area , another way if I early free at my work,I will collect. See you soon

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weekend at my home! Best Wishes, Rinks

Submitted by Rinks on Fri Jun 11 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

219 words

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