IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 8

You recently stayed at a hotel and you had a great time. Write a letter to the hotel. In your letter thank the manager and his staff give some particular examples of why you enjoyed your stay at the hotel so much explain that you have written a review of the hotel on a popular website for tourists You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Jashanpreet Kaur and I am one of the latest customers at your respectable hotel (room number: 809). I am writing
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 letter to humbly appreciate the kind of support and services your place has delivered.
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 with, I would like to extend my warm greetings to the team lead Mr. Bhubaneshwar, who , with his empathetic and resilient personality, made sure that me and my family were getting the best staying experience.
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, it is worth mentioning that he was always available via phone throughout our vacation at the premises.
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, I am very grateful for the housekeeping team as they ensured that our assigned room and lavatory were clean and tidy every time we left for an outdoor trip.
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, the food service team was always on time with their healthy and nutritious cuisines at the comfort of our doorstep.
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, please accept a five-star rating and a thank-you note as a form of gratitude from myself
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 my family members. I would like to thank the hotel wholeheartedly
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 we wait for our next stay with the company. Yours faithfully, Jass
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Coherence and Cohesion
Consider varying sentence lengths for a smoother flow.
Task Achievement
Ensure all aspects of the task are covered, with details supporting each point as you have done here.
Coherence and Cohesion
Clear and effective structure with appropriate greeting and closing.
Task Achievement
The response fully addresses the task with appropriate examples and maintains a polite tone.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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