Some people think that sports play an important role in society. Others think they are nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There
has
been arguments about whether playing Change the verb form
have
sports
is a significant part of Use synonyms
the
society or is considered Correct article usage
apply
as
a leisure activity. In my opinion, I believe that Change preposition
apply
excersizing
would contribute significantly to the Correct your spelling
exercising
prosperty
of the society through enhancing the health state of its individuals.
Some would argue that enrolling in a Correct your spelling
prosperity
property
sport
activity is deemed as Change the noun form
sports
method
of entertainment because Add an article
a method
the method
people
spend Use synonyms
wonderfull
times doing workouts whenever they have free time. Correct your spelling
wonderful
This
is supported by the idea that most Linking Words
people
are not Use synonyms
commited
Correct your spelling
committed
toward
playing Change preposition
to
sports
regularly because there are other important responsibilities that have more Use synonyms
piriorty
than Correct your spelling
priority
sports
activities; Use synonyms
such
as household and work tasks. Linking Words
For example
, most young individuals are playing football with their friends for fun. Linking Words
This
perspective might be considered weak because Linking Words
sports
can add invaluable value to the lifestyle of Use synonyms
people
.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, workouts Linking Words
has
always contributed significantly to Change the verb form
have
the
Correct article usage
apply
humans
well-being, which in return it would help them to work harder for building Change to a genitive case
human's
humans'
better
future for their Correct article usage
a better
communties
. Correct your spelling
communities
This
is because Linking Words
particpating
in Correct your spelling
participating
differnet
Correct your spelling
different
sports
activities has often helped individuals to improve their mental and physical health, increasing their Use synonyms
productivety
rate. There have been great numbers of studies that Correct your spelling
productivity
shows
how playing sport helps Change the verb form
show
people
to strengthen their immune system as well as tackle their depressions and stress. Use synonyms
This
would certainly motivate Linking Words
people
to focus more Use synonyms
in
participating in the advancement and development of their country.
To sum up, it might seem sensible to consider Change preposition
on
sports
as an entertainment activity because Use synonyms
people
are doing it for Use synonyms
entertaintment
whenever they have time for it. Correct your spelling
entertainment
However
, I would disagree with Linking Words
this
statement because it could lead to building a better life for the community through improving the well-being of Linking Words
human
.Fix the agreement mistake
humans
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite