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Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

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Nowadays when we turn on the TV, we can easily see piles of eye-catching advertisements about different services and
products
. Many companies invited celebrities to be their
products
 representatives. purchasers opt for those
products
 owing to the idols they love but not the necessity of those goods.
Nevertheless
, measures
such
 as a fair rating mechanism can be introduced to solve the problem. In my opinion, I think people are influenced heavily by advertisements.
Firstly
, it is understandable that companies adopt some promotion tactics so as to gain market shares. Some marketing strategies,
for example
, sending invitations to famous stars to help them to sell the
items
 that will enter the market. Obviously, because of the positive image of celebrities, purchasers are easily attracted by the appearance of stars
instead
 of the nature of the
items
. Worse still, they obviously neglected the urgency and necessity of those
items
.
Consequently
, they will buy lots of useless things in the long team. Despite the adverse effect that the advertisement brings along to us, a fair rating mechanism can be an effective way to tackle the bad situation. Companies can put their
products
, no matter services or
items
, into the rating
system
. The
system
 will automatically rate those
products
 in various categories
such
 as price, durability and warranty among the database.
Thus
, consumers can compare the quality of tones of
items
 before they make any decision. In conclusion, purchasers usually decide to buy something because of the idolatry of famous celebrities. They forget the importance of purchasing goods. In order to change the bad habits, people can use a fair rating
system
 to have a better selection experience. In my opinion,
although
 buyers are affected seriously by advertisements, they will be protected by the rating
system
 in shopping.
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