Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Music
is believed to be one of the best ways to reunite people
from different cultures, ages, and even religions. As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with this
statement, music
has the power to join people
all over the world
. The reasons for this
magic will be discussed in this
essay.
Broadly speaking, music
has an incredible mission in
Change preposition
on
this
planet, it does not matter what kind of style one listens to, it may be blues, rock, country, rap or even classical music
, it has the power of sending out messages, not only through its sounds produced by instruments but also
the lyrics that are composed. Music
is composited of several paramount elements such
as promoting love and peace among humans, discussing political issues, for entertainment reasons as well, the intention is diversified.
Consequently
, festivals or concerts are promoted to bring people
all over the world
together for this
purpose. The main objective, certainly, is to make a profit but even though what can be seen is that people
travel from different places to participate in these events. For instance
, one of the biggest festivals in the world
is Rock in Rio, it
takes place every two years in Rio de Janeiro - Brazil. Correct pronoun usage
which
This
festival is held for two weeks and millions of people
come from different countries to participate, several bands from different styles perform their songs. It is believed that not only the audience but also
the city is benefited from these events.
To conclude, music
is able to make us aware of things that happen around the world
, it also
stirs our feelings, the message that is
sent can make the world
better, festivals and events that involve music
reunite people
and transform their lives.Submitted by vivaldo.santana.ca on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite