some people fail in school but end up being successful in life. why do you think that is the case ? what is the most important thing to succeed in life?

In the 21st century, human
life
is more complex, whereas a group of
people
win
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their
life
without being a good academic background. In
this
essay, I will explain my opinion and major tips for
success
in
life
.
To begin
, there are many
people
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who
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are
success
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successful
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in their
life
without
a proper grades
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proper grades
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in school.
For example
, in India majority of the prominent politicians are illiterate or
failure
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failures
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in their schools but they are
success
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successful
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in leadership and even they are control highly educated
people
in
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society.
Firstly
, practical knowledge is different from academic score because without
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proper experience no one can apply it properly.
Secondly
, taking
challenge
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challenges
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brings
people
to create a new world in their surroundings.
Thirdly
,
life
is mixed with sorrows and challenges whoever, overcome these problems win the race of
life
.
In addition
, most of the failures in
school
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the school
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system followed these principles in their
life
thats
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that's
that
why they are the winners in their
life
. Apparently, self-realization is the key point of enhancing abilities because understanding our own qualities make perfection in any job.
On the other hand
,
self confidence
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self-confidence
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helps to overcome challenges
on
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life
and brings new paths for task achievements. Admittedly, more practice
make
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makes
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more
success
in their
life
in spite of any difficult conditions in
life
. To illustrate
this
, Alfred Einstein did more than 1000times of practice in his theory Quantum mechanism E = MC2 square and at
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he
orginated
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originated
the
world famous
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theory. In conclusion, there is a saying 'bird without
wings'
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wings similarly
similarly
without hard work no one can
success
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succeed
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.
Life
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lesson is more accurate than academic theories whereas everyone needs a mentality to learn
this
challenges.
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