Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in newspapers and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is considered by some that the
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is not related to people's livelihood and
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why it does not deserve the attention to read or watch them. In my opinion, it is really questionable if one should acquire
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a type of knowledge or not.
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essay will discuss both sides. On the one hand,processing the
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can lead to overloading our brains with useless
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.
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, an average citizen has no need to heat the
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about wars, conflicts, weather
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catastrophic
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if it is only not linked with his or her own region.
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,to my view, it only distracts the mind and puts a watcher into an anxious mood. My parents watch television
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every evening and learn nothing from them but some rubbish facts which are undoubtedly important for other continents but not for Russia, the place where they live.
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, the
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linked with the area where
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lives becomes crucial in some sort of situation.
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, knowledge about local floods, car accidents, fires and other emergency situations can orient
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person
and prevent him or her from taking part in
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unfortunate events. In conclusion, I would say that the question
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perceiving the
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by one is useless or not depends on the type of
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. It influences mind overload or
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sponsors
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society with extremely helpful knowledge which can help it to escape unhappy occasions. I think the government of each particular country should inform the population with the
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Informed
  • Current events
  • Public awareness
  • Local news
  • Global issues
  • Sensationalism
  • Misinformation
  • Bias
  • Community
  • Public safety
  • Health advisories
  • Market trends
  • Traffic updates
  • Weather forecasts
  • Educate
  • Raise awareness
  • Opinion formation
  • Decision making
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