You see an advertisement for a product. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Tell your friend where you saw the advertisement Describe the product Explain why your friend should buy this product.

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Hello John, I have a great news! But first of all, how are you doing, everything fine? I am writing to you with a big announcement.

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evening I saw a great commercial on TV, it was an advertisement for a product you looking for. Do you remember your dream bike? I saw it yesterday, it was a great yellow machine, it looked like sunshine, believe me, it was amazing. The bike has enormous wheels exactly as you showed me in the magazine. At the front and back are lights, red and white, I am pretty sure you can ride during the night. And most importantly during the

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I saw some details about the price. If you decide to buy it you will get a 20% discount. I am sure is a big occasion. What do you think? If you haven't decided yet I am 100% sure you should buy it. It was your big dream when we were kids, and now you can afford it. I know it's a big decision but I know you have to buy it. Please let me know about your decision and I believe you will make the right decision. I hope we will see soon. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure all details in the description add value and are concise.

Task Achievement

Include why the product is specifically suitable for your friend, perhaps by elaborating on past discussions or preferences.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter opens and closes with friendly and warm greetings, adding a personal touch.

Task Achievement

The tone of the letter is engaging and friendly, well-suited to writing to a friend.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

213 words

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