With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?

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It has been suggested that topic for discussion, how we can increase the
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of elder
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and they should be defended. In my opinion, there are some ways for progress in their
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with, how can be elder
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developed? Recently, I have read that from social media,
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process doesn't depend
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us because the health must be defended with various activities by themselves.
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as the cigarettes must be avoided, daily sport trains, daily sport must be done, getting positive energy, cheerful
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of nervous, anxiety and so on. Briefly, I believe strongly, these activities can increase the
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of both the younger and the elder,
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managing rules depend from themselves again, these can't be managed by the others.
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, some protective measures ought to be enforced by the government to protect
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.
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, the country has to find out negatives points or the elder's decreasing reasons.
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, as a matter of fact, without home
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or orphan elder
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's
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is developing so I consider that
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people
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have to be cared or protect from the hazards by the government. As an example, the amount of
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nursing homes should be got progress, extra income must be paid and so on.
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, my personal view on
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matter, their
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progress
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the measures of both government and themselves. Taking everything into consideration, I am of the opinion that these measures and notions can assist the elder's
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in the growth,
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furthermore
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these enactments are useful for managing
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