The number of endangered species has increased significantly in this century and we find more mass extinctions in this period than in any other period of time. State some reasons for this and provide possible solutions.

One
cannot let go of the fact that
species
are getting endangered day by day. There are hundreds of living creatures that are being wiped out from the country every year. It is terrific to imagine a day, where there are no
species
left, as we ourselves are creating
one
such
situation. In
this
essay, I shall explain the reasons for the
species
becoming extinct and
also
the possible solutions or efforts we can put to save our universe.
Firstly
,
one
of the major reasons for
this
evacuation of
species
is poaching. Humans hunt animals to extinction. It gives them extreme pride and joy to hunt animals for their own benefits. It is a serious threat for the wildlife staying in the National Parks.
For example
, sheep are hunted for their wool. In the northern part of India at Ladakh, animals are hunted for fur, leather and many more. Jackets, boots, gloves are made out of them to survive the weather conditions in that state.
Hence
, the public and the government is equally responsible for
such
brutal things to happen
However
, the only way to address
this
issue is by taking strict action against the accused. The punishments should be very severe that
one
should not think of performing
such
an act.
Also
, the living beings which are still existing in few numbers and are almost on their way to get extinct should be protected
first
by the federal society. Special acts must be formed and immediate action should be taken.
Hence
, I conclude that every citizen should be equally responsible for protecting the motherland. Else, these disasters will just continue and we are going to lose all the beautiful beings existing on
this
earth.
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