There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?
Among today generation having a nuclear family is preferred
than
the big one. There are many factors in consideration. I will Change preposition
over
delved
into the advantages and disadvantages of it in Change the verb form
delve
this
essay.
The most Correct your spelling
preferable
preferrable
benefit is that we can combat the growing population. Correct your spelling
preferable
It's
yearly Correct your spelling
Its
rise- up
is a matter of major concern worldwide. As we have limited sources of land, water and food, it has become very difficult to feed so many pupils. In many Correct your spelling
rise-up
over- populated
countries like China, Correct your spelling
over-populated
government
has passed the law that a couple can have only two kids and these rules Add an article
the government
has
helped them to tackle Change the verb form
have
this
issue. Moreover
, as prices of basic commodities are surging day by day, parents wants have
Fix the infinitive
to have
less
Correct quantifier usage
fewer
number
of children like one or two so that they can afford a good lifestyle. Correct quantifier usage
fewer
For example
, if both husband and wife do a decent job, they want that their child should get a better education and not to be deprived of basic neccessties
like food, water, toys and games. As school fees and essential things are getting costlier with the passage of time, so both Correct your spelling
necessities
will
desired to have Change to a plural noun
wills
less
kids.
The major drawback of having Change the quantifier
fewer
small
family is that the toddler will not have any brother or sister. As we know infants who grew up in big families are more responsible, caring and have adjusting nature than who grew up in Add an article
a small
small
family. Add an article
the small
a small
For instance
, my friend is a single child of her parents. When she came to live in hostel
, she Add an article
a hostel
the hostel
find
it very difficult to share things with other Change the verb form
finds
roomates
. Correct your spelling
roommates
Moreover
, being only kid
, they are way too pampered Fix the agreement mistake
kids
also
. These teenagers want their needs to be fulfilled immediately whereas adsolescents
having siblings have more patience.
In the conclusion, we have already mentioned the advantages and disadvantages of having Correct your spelling
adolescents
less
Correct quantifier usage
fewer
number
of children. The rising up of cost and depriving resources are the important factors to be considered these days. So, that's why both the partners are opting to have Correct quantifier usage
fewer
limited
number of children.Correct article usage
a limited
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