There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?

Among today generation having a nuclear family is preferred
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the big one. There are many factors in consideration. I will
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into the advantages and disadvantages of it in
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benefit is that we can combat the growing population.
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yearly
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is a matter of major concern worldwide. As we have limited sources of land, water and food, it has become very difficult to feed so many pupils. In many
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countries like China,
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has passed the law that a couple can have only two kids and these rules
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helped them to tackle
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, as prices of basic commodities are surging day by day, parents wants
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of children like one or two so that they can afford a good lifestyle.
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, if both husband and wife do a decent job, they want that their child should get a better education and not to be deprived of basic
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necessities
like food, water, toys and games. As school fees and essential things are getting costlier with the passage of time, so both
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desired to have
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kids. The major drawback of having
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family is that the toddler will not have any brother or sister. As we know infants who grew up in big families are more responsible, caring and have adjusting nature than who grew up in
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family.
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, my friend is a single child of her parents. When she came to live in
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, she
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it very difficult to share things with other
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roommates
.
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, they are way too pampered
also
. These teenagers want their needs to be fulfilled immediately whereas
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adolescents
having siblings have more patience. In the conclusion, we have already mentioned the advantages and disadvantages of having
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of children. The rising up of cost and depriving resources are the important factors to be considered these days. So, that's why both the partners are opting to have
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number of children.
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  • Living standards
  • Concentrated resources
  • Parent-child bonding
  • Upbringing
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Supportive network
  • Cooperation
  • Multigenerational
  • Cultural traditions
  • Agricultural communities
  • Loneliness
  • Social competencies
  • Financial strain
  • Resource dilution
  • Education opportunities
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