YOU HAVE RECENTLY MOVED TO A NEW NEIGHBORHOOD. WRITE A LETTER TO A FRIEND, IN THE LETTER : 1)EXPLAIN WHY YOU MOVED 2)DESCRIBE YOUR NEW NEIGHBOORHOOD 3)INVITE YOUR FRIEND TO VISIT YOU

Dear Sally, I wanted to let you know that I have recently moved to a new neighbourhood. The reason is that I wanted to be closer to my job. It is a quiet and pretty place to live, and I hope you will visit me here soon. I had been looking for some time for a house closer to my job. Before, it took me almost an hour to get to work by bus. Now, I can walk to the office in just 15 minutes.

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makes my life easier in many ways. My fresh borough is deeply welcoming and well-located. There

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a range of green parks and public gardens where we can enjoy during our leisure time and there is very little traffic. On top of that, there are various establishments,

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supermarket

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and pharmacies just

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steps from my condominium. I hope you be

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available

to visit me at my new house sometime soon. We could have lunch and

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take a walk through the

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. I think you would enjoy seeing the gardens since you are

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such

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an avid gardener yourself.

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Aug 14, 2021

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The letter addresses all the points of the task and provides relevant information.

coherence and cohesion

The letter is well-structured and flows smoothly from one idea to the next. The greeting and closing are appropriate for a letter to a friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

187 words

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YOU HAVE RECENTLY MOVED TO A NEW NEIGHBORHOOD. WRITE A LETTER TO A FRIEND, IN THE LETTER : 1)EXPLAIN WHY YOU MOVED 2)DESCRIBE YOUR NEW NEIGHBOORHOOD 3)INVITE YOUR FRIEND TO VISIT YOU

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city, while others think that bicycle is better. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

Some students choose to take a gap year after graduating high school to work and/or travel. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your experiences.