Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

People

are increasingly shopping online to buy almost everything they need.

This

trend brings evident advantages

such

as

people

saving time and effort,

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the main

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of buying things on the Internet is that it can be not practical most of the

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, especially for everyday

goods

and it might end up in a concerning saturation of the delivering

system

. In my perspective, the benefits of relying on virtual shopping do not outweigh the shortcomings. The greatest benefit of purchasing online is that it is a time and energy-saving habit.

For example

,

people

have no need to stand in line and wait for their turn at some event's stand to buy a ticket as they can comfortably book it online at their home.

Furthermore

, doing grocery shopping online saves the effort to go out and carry heavy bags back to one's place: many

people

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physical hindrances, including disabled ones or

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, would gain the independence of doing shopping on their own and receive the items directly at their place, which would

otherwise

be impossible. For these reasons, purchasing

goods

virtually has become a popular trend among the population.

On the other hand

, purchasing online routinely can be not practical in most cases and it might

also

lead to a severe saturation of the courier

system

. When we need to buy

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,

for instance

, the best way to pick up what is best for us is to try directly by ourselves. In my personal experience, in fact, whenever I use to buy clothes on a store's website I would choose the one that appears suitable according to my body measures, but

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the package arrives, I end up feeling disappointed for picking the wrong size and having to send it back.

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remarkable disadvantage of shopping online

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is that if every person wanted their

goods

to be delivered at their home, the delivery

system

would saturate as couriers would need to handle a massive amount of packages per day.On top of being stressful for past officers and hauliers, buying

goods

from the internet can be

also

not environmental-friendly with

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increase

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air pollution and waste production. To conclude, more and more customers buy products on the Internet rather than visiting the physical shop by themselves.

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purchasing online is more

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in terms of saving time and effort, relying on online shopping alone proved to be not always the most effective way to purchase and it can

also

impact negatively on the delivery work

system

that would need to

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tackle

take

an extremely high demand of to-go products.

Subsequently

, I believe that the benefits of purchasing on online platforms do not exceed the drawbacks.