Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
People
are increasingly shopping online to buy almost everything they need. This
trend brings evident advantages such
as people
saving time and effort, however
the main Add a comma
,however
drawbacks
of buying things on the Internet is that it can be not practical most of the Fix the agreement mistake
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times
, especially for everyday Fix the agreement mistake
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goods
and it might end up in a concerning saturation of the delivering system
. In my perspective, the benefits of relying on virtual shopping do not outweigh the shortcomings.
The greatest benefit of purchasing online is that it is a time and energy-saving habit. For example
, people
have no need to stand in line and wait for their turn at some event's stand to buy a ticket as they can comfortably book it online at their home. Furthermore
, doing grocery shopping online saves the effort to go out and carry heavy bags back to one's place: many people
suffering by
physical hindrances, including disabled ones or Change preposition
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elderies
, would gain the independence of doing shopping on their own and receive the items directly at their place, which would Correct your spelling
elderlies
elders
elder
otherwise
be impossible. For these reasons, purchasing goods
virtually has become a popular trend among the population.
On the other hand
, purchasing online routinely can be not practical in most cases and it might also
lead to a severe saturation of the courier system
. When we need to buy clothings
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clothing
items of clothing
articles of clothing
for instance
, the best way to pick up what is best for us is to try directly by ourselves. In my personal experience, in fact, whenever I use to buy clothes on a store's website I would choose the one that appears suitable according to my body measures, but everytime
the package arrives, I end up feeling disappointed for picking the wrong size and having to send it back. Replace the word
every time
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Another
An other
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,
is that if every person wanted their Remove the comma
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goods
to be delivered at their home, the delivery system
would saturate as couriers would need to handle a massive amount of packages per day.On top of being stressful for past officers and hauliers, buying goods
from the internet can be also
not environmental-friendly with dramatic
increase Add an article
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of
air pollution and waste production.
To conclude, more and more customers buy products on the Internet rather than visiting the physical shop by themselves. Change preposition
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Although
purchasing online is more effecting
in terms of saving time and effort, relying on online shopping alone proved to be not always the most effective way to purchase and it can Replace the word
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also
impact negatively on the delivery work system
that would need to takcle
an extremely high demand of to-go products. Correct your spelling
tackle
take
Subsequently
, I believe that the benefits of purchasing on online platforms do not exceed the drawbacks.Submitted by ylyneko1998 on
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