Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars, even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Admiration of sport and media

celebrities

by youngsters is highly debated among the old generation. Proponents of famous people claim the benefits of following the

stars

, while opponents point out the demerits. In the following paragraphs, I will explain why it is a positive trend as well as negative. There are numerous aspects of the public figures being the role models for today's youth. They could inspire them to change

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lifestyles in a better way.

Firstly

, most

celebrities

are

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daily participants of gym clubs and fitness

centers

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. The strong body and healthy habits of

stars

might be a great example of health and fit standards.

Secondly

,

stars

, in most cases, are rich, and they are able to encourage youngsters to invest money

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charity purposes, thereby maintaining the health, study and social organizations.

Lastly

, famous figures demonstrate the

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process for adolescents to achieve their goals, not just dreaming about it.

For example

, Shawn Mendes as known as

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teenager singer manifests his way from a cover maker in 2012 to a world star by inspiring videos of his work during 10 years

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in

this

field.

However

, there are

also

some drawbacks providing by public humans.

Celebrities

tend to not bother about their acts and can show

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examples of misbehaviours

such

as smoking, drinking

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alcohol, and so on. Undoubtedly, their activities might contribute to the problems among youth.

For instance

, looking at famous figures, young people start to imitate their habits that lead to health issues and repercussions.

Hence

, if

celebrities

do not take responsibility for their actions, it could lead to hazardous effects. In conclusion, role models play an essential role in youth's lives, but

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can show them not only positive

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but

also

negative effects on their behaviour.

Thus

,

stars

should take responsibility for their actions in order to avoid issues among youngsters.