Some people say that the positive effects of advertising outweigh its negative effects. Do you agree or disagree?
In the past centuries,
advertisements
are used to publicize the products
, which can help merchants attract more consumers
and achieve higher sales. In modern society, advertisements
is
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people
’s life
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Internet
. Consumers
can see advertisements
everywhere and catch more information about the latest production, but sometimes people
will be affected by advertisements
negatively. In my opinion, advertising has more
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effects
in
our daily life in recent years.
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Firstly
, advertisements
usually interrupt people
’s work or entertainment. In digital
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the internet
people
join lots of work or entertainment online. At the same time, merchants also
aim to attract potential consumers
from the internet
, so huge amounts of advertisements
are published on the internet
, which often interrupt
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people
’s activities. Take YouTube for example
, when people
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advertisement must be watched before, sometimes people
’s expectation
of the video will be deducted during the advertisement. Fix the agreement mistake
expectations
Also
, the advertisements
on some websites that cover up some significant information make people
confused.
On the other hand
, some advertisements
mislead people
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products
. Recently, many advertisements
are added some misleading content, which builds an illusion that people
need the products
in these advertisements
. For instance
, some drink companies make publicize that their new products
include zero sugar, thus
people
can drink them without the concerns
of being fat. Fix the agreement mistake
concern
However
, there are still contain ingredients with high calories. This
kind of advertisements
never cheat consumer, but some functions of products
are exaggerated, or some information is hidden. As a result
, most consumers
waste their money on those useless products
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theirselves
.
In conclusion, the advantage of advertising is less than the negative Correct your spelling
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people
in modern society. Although
advertisements
increase the sales of products
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people
in some bad aspects. Therefore
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the positive
effects
of advertising can hardly cover the side effects
it makes.Submitted by timmygu0325 on
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