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Some people say that the positive effects of advertising outweigh its negative effects. Do you agree or disagree?

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In the past centuries,
advertisements
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 are used to publicize the
products
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, which can help merchants attract more
consumers
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 and achieve higher sales. In modern society,
advertisements
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is
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 continuously increasing in
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people
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’s
life
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, especially on the
Internet
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.
Consumers
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 can see
advertisements
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 everywhere and catch more information about the latest production, but sometimes
people
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 will be affected by
advertisements
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 negatively. In my opinion, advertising has
more
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 negative
effects
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in
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on
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 our daily life in recent years.
Firstly
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,
advertisements
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 usually interrupt
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people
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’s work or entertainment. In
digital
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the digital
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 age, because of the convenience of
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internet
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the internet
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,
people
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 join lots of work or entertainment online. At the same time, merchants
also
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 aim to attract potential
consumers
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 from the
internet
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, so huge amounts of
advertisements
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 are published on the
internet
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, which often
interrupt
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interrupts
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people
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’s activities. Take YouTube
for example
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, when
people
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 open a link
of
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 a video, a thirty-
second
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 advertisement must be watched before, sometimes
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people
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’s
expectation
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expectations
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 of the video will be deducted during the advertisement.
Also
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, the
advertisements
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 on some websites that cover up some significant information make
people
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 confused.
On the other hand
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, some
advertisements
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 mislead
people
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consume
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to consume
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 useless
products
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. Recently, many
advertisements
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 are added some misleading content, which builds an illusion that
people
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 need the
products
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 in these
advertisements
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.
For instance
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, some drink companies make publicize that their new
products
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 include zero sugar,
thus
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people
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 can drink them without the
concerns
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concern
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 of being fat.
However
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, there are still contain ingredients with high calories.
This
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 kind of
advertisements
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 never cheat consumer, but some functions of
products
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 are exaggerated, or some information is hidden.
As a result
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, most
consumers
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 waste their money on those useless
products
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 for
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themselves
theirselves
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themselves
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. In conclusion, the advantage of advertising is less than the negative
effects
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to
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 common
people
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 in modern society.
Although
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advertisements
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 increase the sales of
products
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 for many companies, which promote the development of
society
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 economy, they still affect
people
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 in some bad aspects.
Therefore
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,
positive
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the positive
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effects
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 of advertising can hardly cover the side
effects
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 it makes.
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