Medical professionals such as doctors and nurses from poor countries often migrate to richer countries to work. What problems arise from this situation? What measure can be taken to deal with it?

There are many people who have called into question the importance in today’s world of
subjects
like
history
, which do not have an immediately discernible impact on most
future
careers. While I think that
history
should still be mandatory, more practical
subjects
related to technology and the
arts
are more needed in our evolving world. The main reason that
students
should study some
history
in
school
is that it provides crucial insights into nations around the world that serve as springboards for later political beliefs. In America,
students
learn about the American Revolution, the constitution and the founding fathers periodically from elementary to high
school
. They learn about why the war started (so that the colonies could tax and govern themselves) as well as the great figures from
history
like George Washington, Thomas Jefferson, and Benjamin Franklin. Some of the principles
students
learn include the ideas of American exceptionalism, life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness, and the responsibility of citizens to vote in a representative democracy. Later in life, most people will lean liberal or conservative but still hold the same basic convictions about individual liberty and responsibility. By knowing the context in which these ideas emerged
students
can become adults with well-informed political beliefs and it will be more difficult for unscrupulous politicians to make false assertions about the past.
Although
history
should still be taught, the practical sciences and
arts
should be prioritised because these are more likely to have an impact on a person’s
future
career. Very few
students
will end up with careers in
history
, as historians or professors, but a large percentage will work in the
arts
and especially the sciences.
For example
, in
Vietnam
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the most popular university majors are engineering, finance, and graphic design. If schools emphasise maths at
school
then
this
will better prepare them to make calculations in complex engineering projects or when working at a bank or accountancy firm. Even learning how to draw and use
colors
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in art class is more useful for
students
because of the high demand for graphic designers on websites and advertisements. Countries that devote more of their educational budget towards these practical
subjects
will give
students
a head start on a potential
future
career and increase their chances of having a higher standard of living. It is clear that in
this
case
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a moderate approach is best.
School
administrators should not remove
history
from the timetable but in my
opinion
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they should devote more time and resources to the teaching of
subjects
related to technology and the
arts
.
This
will become ever more important as the tech industry continues to dominate the
future
job market.
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