Many people say that we now live in 'consumer societies' where money and possessions are given too much importance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
In the midst of
this
Linking Words
technology driven-global world,most folks think that, as we all living in the twenty-
first
Linking Words
century,people give more importance to social
status
Use synonyms
and finance. I totally agree with
this
Linking Words
statement,in
this
Linking Words
essay I will illustrate it with my experiences. Over the past few decades,human habits and thinking ability had changed a lot. Apparently,most of them want to get good possession in society, to achieve that, they are ready to work hard. As per today's situation, those who have a good amount of
money
Use synonyms
, have a better
status
Use synonyms
in their state or country.
Therefore
Linking Words
all are running behind
money
Use synonyms
,as they work day and night.
As a result
Linking Words
, they are not only compromising family relationships but
also
Linking Words
their health.To illustrate
this
Linking Words
,I had a friend in my college,who was very keen to make more
money
Use synonyms
,
thus
Linking Words
, he will get a good reputation in his village,
that is
Linking Words
what he told to everyone.He used to work after our college time without having proper food or rest.
this
Linking Words
was continued for three years.
However
Linking Words
, he couldn't even enjoy his life as he wished,before that all of a sudden he had died due to cardiac arrest. In the current society what we are living in now is a dangerous one. Ostensibly,here people are making relationships with others by measuring their monitory background and social
status
Use synonyms
. Even from childhood,kids are getting trained by their parents, not to keep friendship with those who come from a low socio-economic background.
For example
Linking Words
,
last
Linking Words
year I visited a school,there I found a boy who was standing in a corner, not mingling with others,while the rest of the students were playing.
Then
Linking Words
I asked that boy about the reason,He told me that,he is coming from a coastal area and his father is a fisherman ,so the rest of them won't even talk with him, even though he is a rank holder in his school.
This
Linking Words
is how our
next
Linking Words
generation is growing. All are simply just behind
money
Use synonyms
and social
status
Use synonyms
. To conclude,Most of them in
this
Linking Words
generation are very passionate to make more wealth and achieving a better
status
Use synonyms
in
this
Linking Words
consumer society.Tacitly, all humanitarian considerations and values were neglected.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: