Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries is positive development, while others think that many countries will lose their national identities as a result. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In

this

day and age, it is

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truth that commercial and

cutural

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cultural

interaction has an

inseperable

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inseparable

relationship with the growth of any

aspects

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of each

country

.

However

, whether developing it has always been a topic of

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public. While a number of

people

argue that promoting communication between these regions may carry some potential dangers for identity, others have a contrary-minded that it will significantly create superb results in

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connection. Personally, I contend that the benefits that globalization brings about outweighs the drawbacks. On the one hand, it is understandable that why some groups of

community

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believe that the interconnection between countries will take a heavy toll on

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national recognition. The key rationale is that as foreign influences, especially the Western cultures that permeate other societies, more

people

will embrace intriguingly external ideas and start to consider that their conventional custom as obsolete, which may probably result in a loss of the national true

values

.

However

,

this

thinking is totally exaggerated. As far as I am concerned,

instead

of marginalizing the traditional

values

of every

country

,

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globalization has given a larger range of

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chances

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for citizens all over the world to introduce and open their own culture to other friends. Korea perfectly exemplifies

this

situation. The widespread presence of entertainment companies and TV programmes, specifically the "Hallyu wave", has been the key to foster and promote a global appreciation towards

this

country

.

This

is a testament to

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impacts of

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contact on a

country

's

values

.

On the other hand

, I am of the opinion that

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global development will offer stupendous advantages. In terms of business, many entrepreneurs can expand the foreign markets.

As a result

, many jobs are created which will directly improve

people

's living standards. To give a clear example, the contribution of

SamSung

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Samsung

in VietNam has

hostically

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holistically

historically

addressed the unemployment of a plethora of

people

.

In addition

to

this

, in terms of culture, the integration among these areas will mitigate many social problems which occurs on a

regualr

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regular

basis. To exemplify, the thinking of

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community will gradually turn the gender inequality sentiments on Asia society's head.

Therefore

, it seems sensible that we can broaden our

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towards a harmonized development. In conclusion, while the exchange in tradition

as well as trading

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still exist some disadvantages, it is irrefutable that the global changing has created many significant benefits for each and

everyone

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. It is

also

clear that the traditional

values

can be separately maintained in tandem with the global integration.