the average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

physical fitness is regarded

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most valuable aspect of life, as it cannot be bought. it is believed that the quality of human's well-being is likely to deteriorate over a period of time. as far as circumstances are concerned,

i

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strongly agree with

this

opinion.

firstly

, the salient origin of the issue is stress resulting in

eating-disorders

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eating disorders

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namely anorexia, bulimia which

further

affects the psychological condition as well as physical fitness. not only give rise to obesity but

also

reduces their self-

esteeem

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esteem

, due to which they acquire

sedentary

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lifestyle promoting their possibility of experimenting

minor

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as well as major heart attacks.

for instance

, recently in my neighbourhood, there were two cases reported of major strokes due to abundant intake of convenience food.

in addition

to

this

,

competitive

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lifestyle is

also

a ground for

this

crisis. to put it more simply, people in preceding years to now has been residing in

fast-moving

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world which ultimately

bring

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obout

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about

the notion of being superior.

furthermore

, they tend to work till midnight as well as pulling

all

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nighter

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resulting

not

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in not

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only sleep deprivation, but

also

depression.

as a result

of

this

, they break

connection

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from the society perceiving them as a threat, influencing their mentality in a negative way.

for example

, my cousin has been suffering from depression attributable to vying for distinction in studies. despite all the emotional assistance, she gets anxious in

situation

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a situation

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which requires socializing. to conclude, at

first

, nutritious food should be consumed in order to detoxify the body and to obtain the necessary vitamins to avoid inadequate development of the brain

additionally

body.

secondly

, participating in group activities should be encouraged to include contentment in

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life which will beget an increased lifespan.